English essay 1
Yesterday, my brother Eli got a dog. His name is Hayze and he’s 4-5 months old. Hayze is a boxer mix, but we don’t know for sure what he’s mixed with. Hayze loves to play, and is very energetic, but he loves to cuddle and espesaly lick faces. He loves to meer new people and make new friends. One of Hayze’s favorite things to do is chew on sticks. Hayxe also likes to play with balls and run around in circles. Hayze’s fur is brown with a hint of black in it. the tip of Hayze’s paws are white. haze is really soft and so adorable.Since haze is my brother’s, he stays at eli’s house, but we get to dog sit him while Eli’s at work. Hayze is so loving and caring to everyone. Thismorning, my little brother was coughing, and Haze went over and cuddled with him. The cutest thing about Hayyze is his tail. Hayyze’s tail is just shy of 12 inches long, and makes it so cute when he wags his tail. Hayze is very curious, and I can’t wait to see what adorable thing he does next.
You spelled “meet” “meer”. Then when spelling Hayze you spelled it “hayxe” and then you also spelled it Hazzye twice. Finally you didn’t put a space in “This morning”. Besides that I can’t find anything else to correct.
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I know. sorry!
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cool dog i saw one typo you typed hayxe not hayze in one part of your story
overall its cute and good
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